First Draft Ident

This is the first draft of my ident for 'The grid.' Looking at the breif  I decided to  make sure my text wasnt overlapping and too close together  becuase it looked odd, I need to include music and I also need to think carefully about how it is going to last 30 seconds.

To improve on this I  am going to sort out my text to make sure it doesnt  overlap any of the other words so it is made nice and clear. I am going to use the animate part and make sure that i make the letters spaced out accordingly. To add music into my piece I will need to import my ident to my computer and then open it up on premiere so it is then easier for me to add the music and so you can hear it on the final piece. To make sure i fill out the thirty seconds i will slow down the speed the text comes onto the screen.